My fourth draft is far more proffesional than the other three drafts, it has the appropriate details that every magazine should have, such things as a barcode, price and logo. I think this is a good looking cover, but I still think it can be improved. My next magazine cover will be final so I will ask for feedback on this draft and improve it with other peoples comments and thoughts.

School Magazine Cover- 3rd Draft

My 3rd draft is much better than the other two, for a start it looks far more like a front cover. Firstly, the masthead stands out (although the splash does draw the eye more), and there are more strategically placed crossheads to make the page look better, there is even a barcode at the bottom for realism. But this can be improved still.

School Magazine Cover- 2nd draft

This is the 2nd draft of my school magazine cover, this is improved from my first atempt because things like the font colour now match eachother rather than be in a random colour, additionally, there is more on the page to look at, whereas on the first one, there was barely anything on it, so it didn't look finished. However, this is still far to basic and very poor, so I will continue to improve.

School Magazine Cover- 1st draft

This is the 1st draft of my school magazine, as you can see, it is very basic and there are a lot of things wrong with it. So by continually improving it, I will make it slowly better and I will post each cover until i've made my final.

School magazine analysis

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