My second draft is improved from the first because the page is broken down more and the layout of the Page looks better. The first thing I did was add lines along the page splitting up sections which is subconsciously noticeable. However this is not the main feature of the change but it was introduced to make the page more aesthetically pleasing, the main change in the page is my inserted front cover. I have seen this in professional magazines so I thought it would be a good idea to see how it turns out. Not only is it a space filler, but it really does make a difference in making a good looking contents page. If I had left the text box at the bottom plain, it would have affected the contents pages' appearance making it look boring and almost as if I had nothing else to put there. When reading, the audience would prefer a full page of interesting things to look at rather than a few things. On my next draft, I will address the issue of smaller details which will give the page a much better overall finish.
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