My music magazine- Double Page spread second draft

The difference I have made to this page that is different from the last one is that I have made the introductory text larger, this is conventional in magazines because when in a rush, some people just want to read what is happening in one paragraph rather than read the whole article. Also i did this because i though a bit of space was being wasted and it made the rest of the page look to cramped in comparison, so by not having large gaps on the page, readers won't think it was an error or waste of page space.