My music magazine, double page spread draft

My double page spread has undergone slight changes compared to the contents page and front cover. Here all I have dine is simply add my own picture and re-arrange some text. The only problem I can see looking at it is that the left hand page looks good because it isn't all that cramped with text. However if you look at the right hand page you notice that the paragraphs are a lot closer together because of the photo. I will try to address this measure but unless it is pointed out, you don't particularly notice this.